Hello. I am an old user here who left about a year or 2 ago. I am not coming back to still and help on the wiki. I was look at my old work on here 2 days ago and come across my first chapter on my fan made turok story. I noticed a lot of errors on it. I'm not sure why but I wanted to fix them and rewrite some thing a bit.  I think I meanly did this to see how my reading and write skills have improve. I am only here to show one small part of the fan made turok story I fixed and if you guys like want I have, I can continued working on this story. Now I know I stopped working on 2 of my fan ade story, but here is the thing , I'm only going to work on it if you guys want more and I'll be taking my time so it my take me a weeks, mouths, or even a year to upload to new chapter. I kind of don't want to give up on things that I started now. the part of the story that I will upload is the backstory of one of the Turoks named Calloway. Calloway is kind of not a fan made character. He was in the Akklaim Turok time line, but never been in the games or the comics. I hope you like want you going to read

P.S. I'm going to be selling my Turok comics if anyone is interested

Turok Story

Narrator: Calloway, The Demon child, is a Turok who's not known as a hero among the lives in the Lost Land and Earth, but a warrior who fights and kills for his beliefs and his beliefs only. Calloway was raised by his father, Tal'set, the Turok before him, who taught Calloway the ways of the warrior. Tal'set also told stories to Calloway and his younger brother Aram about his role as Turok and the Lost land. Both Calloway and Aram didn't really see their father a lot due to his role of being Turok at the time. Aram mostly spends more time with his mother. As for Calloway, he would train day and night to improve his skills and become a better warrior then his father. He sees his Mother's and brother's kindness and good heart as a weakness. Calloway barely even spoke to them. One day, a group of bandits attacked Calloway's village. Tal'set was at the lost land at the time. The bandits killed villagers and stole valuables. They didn't spared any lives except for one. That one life was Calloway's mother. Calloway and Aram manage to survive thanks to their mother hiding them. However, Calloway ends up following the bandits to their hideout only bringing an axe. When arriving at the hideout, Calloway overheard one of the bandits mention something about Turok. He follows that person into a room were he saw his mother chain up against the wall. She looked up and saw her son. 

Calloway's  Mother: C-Calloway!?

Narrator: The bandit turned around and saw Calloway walking torwards with an axe. The bandit quickly pulled out a knife and held it next to Calloway's mother's neck.

Bandit: D-Don't take a-a-another step kid or Sh-she gets it!

Narrator: Calloway doesn't stop. He kept walking towards him

Bandit: I'm not F*****g around h-here kid

Calloway's  Mother:  Run Calloway! Don't worry about me.

Narrator: Calloway stops and looks at the man

Calloway: Tell me, are you shaking because your scared of me? Or are you scared of killing some one for the first time? 

Narrator: the bandit didn't say a thing, and was shaking even more. With no time to waste, Calloway threw the axe at the man's head. It hit and killed the him. That was Calloway first time killing a human at the age of 10. He then proceeds to grab the keys for the chain from the dead body to free his mother. She kneels down and put her hands on Calloway's shoulders.

Calloway's  Mother: I told you to run! You could of got in hurt! When your father gets back-

Narrator: all of a sudden. She covers Calloway's back with her body. At the same time, a gun fired. Calloway's mother fell down to the floor. She was dead

Bandit 2: You damn moron! You killed the woman! She was supposed to be bait for that Turok guy!

Bandit 3: Sorry sir, but she got in front of that kid.

Bandit 2: Kid?  what Ki-

Narrator: the Bandit noticed the kid standing there looking at him.

Bandit 2:  Hey come to think of it, that mite be Turok's kid. forget the woman. We'll just use the kid as bait

Narrator: Calloway just looked back at him while picking up his axe and the gun from the bandit he just killed. With out hesitating, He ran toward the two bandits at full speeds with the intention to kill. 20 minutes has past. A portal appeared a few feet away from the hideout. Out came Tal'set from it. He quickly ran to the hideout only to see dead bodies everywhere. He noticed Calloway just standing there covered in blood from head to toe. Callowat then looked at his father. 

Tal'set: Your mother, where is she?

Narrator: Calloway didn't say a word and walked away. Tal'set search around the hideout.  He found his wife dead in a room with 3 other dead bodies. Tal'set broke down into tears.

Tal'set: I was too late! Why? Why did this had to happen?

Narrator: Tal'set and Calloway returned to their  village with her body. Tal'set and Aram buried her next to a lake she loved going to. Calloway on the other hand didn't help. He felt that was also a sign of weakness as well. He didn't even seem upset at all over his mothers death.  Her death mean nothing  to him. Later at night. Tal'set came up to Calloway who was sitting next to the fire.

Tal'set: Calloway. I know your not the soft or kind type like your brother, but there will be a time were you have to let it all out.

Narrator: Calloway didn't say anything.

Tal'set: Do you know why your mother loves it here? Its because you were born here. She loved you with all her heart. She would try anything to make you happy, but it won't work.

Narrator: Calloway still didn't say anything.

Tal'set: For once in your life, were you ever happy around her or your brother? Or were you more happy in killing those bandits?

Calloway: You would of kill them too

Tal'set: I would be lying if I said no, but I would of done it for revenge and out of anger. You on the other hand, you didn't do it for revenge or out of anger; you did it because for you, it feels good to fight.

Calloway: And that bothers you because that's not the way you do it?

Tal'set: Because I'm afraid what path your going to take.

Calloway: The path I'll choose will be right one for me if you like it or not

Narrator: Calloway gets up and walked away

Tal'set: promise me this; whatever path you choose, please watch over your brother.

Narrator: Calloway didn't say a word and kept walking. 4 years later, Tal'set became very sick and died from that sickness. Before he died, He gave the light Burden to Calloway making him the new Turok. Few days later, a mysterious creature named Elex came out of a portal. He told Calloway that he is with the Council of Voices and he is here to take him to the Lost Land. Calloway went with Elex and left his brother behind. Calloway lived in the lost land for 5 years hunting, killing, and taking orders from the Council of Voices. He doesn't like taking orders, but he does it just to keep his role as Turok. Along the way, Calloway would meet a Scientist named William, which they would work together to make tek gear, but they don't think of each other as friends. Calloway would followed his role as Turok in his own way until the day he learn the truth about the Council of Voices